Maybe things just feel heavy for him cause he's such an 'impressionable' character...
I like impressionable main characters - aided or not, by their ongoing heaviness. I found your MC very impressionable. Loved this last one. Short, sweet and dare I say it...equally as impressionable as the preceding posts. Am a bit a fan of shiny blue bits too...
Thank you. And thanks to all for following a longer story. There will be more of these. A really big one will start just before Christmas, so stay tuned..
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I seem to remember things felt heavier when she was there....
Excellent.
The old circular narrative trick...
Maybe things just feel heavy for him cause he's such an 'impressionable' character...
I like impressionable main characters - aided or not, by their ongoing heaviness. I found your MC very impressionable. Loved this last one. Short, sweet and dare I say it...equally as impressionable as the preceding posts. Am a bit a fan of shiny blue bits too...
Thank you. And thanks to all for following a longer story. There will be more of these. A really big one will start just before Christmas, so stay tuned..
I like it when you are big.
oh christ. heartbreaking. in the most bittersweet, red wine, beautiful of ways.
I found your site at post four and have been trying to find it all night through google. I'm glad I found it again! Keep up the great work!
thanks very much!
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